Looks great! Have a look at the type size and leading on the explanation paras – you want it to still 'breathe' opposite the very open typesetting of the sonnets. It looks a little tight, but this could just be looking at it on screen. Try: reducing the point size, dropping it back to 80%K or a slightly different colour, changing typeface (though be very careful here), italics? etc.
Looks great! Have a look at the type size and leading on the explanation paras – you want it to still 'breathe' opposite the very open typesetting of the sonnets. It looks a little tight, but this could just be looking at it on screen. Try: reducing the point size, dropping it back to 80%K or a slightly different colour, changing typeface (though be very careful here), italics? etc.
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